Hello my name is Joetta but sometimes they call me Joey. I'm going to be talking about when the church bombing. When the church bomb my brother Kenny went inside of the church and he was the only one that went inside the church from my family. But when he came out the church I called him but he ignored me and ran away into Grandma Sands house. I went to ask him why he ignored but he was acting so weird and then i told him "Kenny why are you ignored me when I was calling you from across the street?" Kenny didn't listen to me, and Grandma Sand came out her room and started to scream at me and she said "Joetta sweety Grandma Sands can not handle this type of noise early in the morning, OK Joetta?" I told Grandma Sands "Yes Grandma Sand I'm listen, but Kenny is acting really weird and I'm confused Grandma Sands." Grandma Sands left and so did I but Kenny was still acting weird. After my other brother Byron had a long talk with Kenny.
Monday, November 9, 2009
JOETTA
Hello my name is Joetta but sometimes they call me Joey. I'm going to be talking about when the church bombing. When the church bomb my brother Kenny went inside of the church and he was the only one that went inside the church from my family. But when he came out the church I called him but he ignored me and ran away into Grandma Sands house. I went to ask him why he ignored but he was acting so weird and then i told him "Kenny why are you ignored me when I was calling you from across the street?" Kenny didn't listen to me, and Grandma Sand came out her room and started to scream at me and she said "Joetta sweety Grandma Sands can not handle this type of noise early in the morning, OK Joetta?" I told Grandma Sands "Yes Grandma Sand I'm listen, but Kenny is acting really weird and I'm confused Grandma Sands." Grandma Sands left and so did I but Kenny was still acting weird. After my other brother Byron had a long talk with Kenny.
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ReplyDeleteGood But remember that Joey doesn't know That Kenny goes into the church because She follows kenny. But wait, I think kenny is seeing things and think he goes into the church but doesn't realize that he is really leading joey out of the church.It weird right?
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